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Feature alteration is generally only available via a voucher from an event. Currently, there is only 1 known alterer that performs the service, [[Beezell]], outside of the system-available options that [[Empath]]s can perform via [[Shift_ability|Shift]].
Feature alteration is generally only available via a voucher from an event. Currently, there is only 1 known alterer that performs the service, [[Beezell]], outside of the system-available options that [[Empath]]s can perform via [[Shift_ability|Shift]].


Below are the rules for feature alterations as approved by staff and made available to all for the purpose of aiding in the case of a voucher being offered.
Below are the rules for feature alterations as approved by staff and made available to all for the purpose of aiding in the case of a voucher being offered.


==General Rules==
==General Rules==
* All colors must be colors that exist in Elanthia.
* May not imply constant motion, inflict feelings or actions on others, or be suggestive/vulgar.
* You may not give yourself a constant/active expression or in any other way imply a static mood.
* May not give yourself extra body parts or any other way fundamentally alter how your race looks.
* May not give yourself any title or affiliation you do not already have.
* Wording order must stay the same as the templates below.
* Each text slot may be 30-50 characters, including spaces.
* The entire feature line may only be 512 characters total, including spaces.
* Skin may not become scales, scales may not become fur, etc.
* Avoid active sounding descriptions and instead stay closer to physical descriptions.
* Unmarked [text] on the templates below may not be changed. Please consider it when writing your features.
* If you get shifted after getting your features altered, you will NOT be able to get your altered feature back.


While this article is intended to be as accurate as possible, there may be additional rules that are not yet included here. (Just because the article does not expressly prohibit your request does not mean that it is guaranteed to be approved.)<br>
===Additional Rules for [[Prydaen]] and [[Rakash]]===
<br>
;Prydaen
*All colors must be colors that exist in Elanthia.
:1) Tortoiseshell and calico coats should not have markings.
*You cannot imply motion or sound.
:2) Glittered coats should not have any additional markings.
:*Avoid active sounding descriptions; stay closer to physical descriptions.
:3) Prydaen with secondary markings must have BOTH color AND pattern set.
*You cannot give yourself a constant/active expression or otherwise imply a static mood or emotion.
:4) Markings and secondary markings should not be the same color as the coat.
*You cannot dictate the feelings or reactions of others.
*You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.
*Scars and burns are permitted, but you cannot add/alter tattoos or brands, as those are separate processes.
*You cannot fundamentally alter how your race looks (nothing that would require you to receive permanent social outrage).
:*No extra body parts.
:*Skin must remain skin; scales must remain scales; fur must remain fur.
*You cannot incorporate items, non-biological matter (such as metal), or non-living biological matter.
*You cannot give yourself magical properties, such as emitting light.
*'''The GM running the merchant or handling your voucher is the final arbiter of whether your request is a permissible alteration.'''
<br>
'''Warning: If you get shifted after getting your features altered, you will NOT be able to get your altered feature back.'''<br>


==Race-specific Rules==
;Rakash
:1) Agouti, brindled, tricolor and piebald coats shouldn't have any additional markings or masks.
:2) Secondary markings should not be the same color as the coat.
:3) If the player has no secondary markings, the mask should not be the same color as the coat (if they have secondary markings, it can be any color)


===Gor'Tog===
;Supplemental information

:https://sites.google.com/site/dragonrealmsweddings/Home/kings-wedding-features-worksheet-and-information
*Eyelashes are permitted, but Gor'Togs cannot have any other hair.

===S'Kra Mur===

See [[S'Kra Mur Physiology]] for general guidelines.<br>

*By request of Team S'Kra, head crests cannot currently be altered due to the lack of available lore on what constitutes an acceptable variation.
*Tail barbs are permitted.

===Prydaen===

See [[Anatomy of the Prydaen]] for general guidelines.<br>

*Tortoiseshell and calico coats cannot have additional markings.
*Glittered coats cannot have any markings.
*Prydaen with secondary markings must have ''both'' color ''and'' pattern set.
*Markings and secondary markings cannot be the same color as the coat.

===Rakash===

*Agouti, brindled, tricolor, and piebald coats cannot have additional markings or masks.
*Secondary markings cannot be the same color as the coat.
*If the character has no secondary markings, the mask cannot be the same color as the coat.
:*If there are secondary markings, the mask can be any color.


==Formatting of Features==
==Formatting of Features==


*Wording order must stay the same as the templates below.
===[[Human]]/[[Dwarf]]/[[Elf]]/[[Halfling]]/[[Elothean]]/[[Gnome]]/[[Kaldar]]===
*Unbracketed text on the templates below cannot be changed. Please consider it when writing your features.
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EarCharacter], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] hair is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
:*Females have a "figure," and males have a "build." This cannot be changed except by changing the character's gender.
*Each text slot may be 30-50 characters, including spaces.
*The entire feature line may only be 512 characters total, including spaces.
<br>
===Human/Dwarf/Elf/Halfling/Elothean/Gnome/Kaldar===
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EarCharacter], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] hair is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Race.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Race.<br>


===[[Gor'Tog]]===
===Gor'Tog===
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build.<br>
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Gor'Tog.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Gor'Tog.<br>


===[[S'kra_mur|S'Kra Mur]]===
===S'Kra Mur===
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [optional head crest]<nowiki>*</nowiki>, [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] slitted [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] snout, [text4] scales with [Underbelly (free text allowed)], a/an [TailCharacter] tail, and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [optional head crest]<nowiki>*</nowiki>, [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] slitted [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] snout, [text4] scales with [Underbelly (free text allowed)], a/an [TailCharacter] tail, and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a S'Kra Mur.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a S'Kra Mur.<br>
<nowiki>*</nowiki>S'Kra head crests cannot be altered at this time due to the lack of available lore on what is an acceptable variation at the request of Team S'Kra Mur.
<nowiki>*</nowiki>S'Kra head crests cannot be altered at this time due to the lack of available lore on what is an acceptable variation at the request of Team S'Kra Mur.


===[[Prydaen]]===
===Prydaen===
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [EarCharacter] ears, cat-slitted [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] mane is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] fur with [optional freetext] and [optional freetext] [optional freetext ], a/an [TailCharacter] tail and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [EarCharacter] ears, cat-slitted [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] mane is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] fur with [optional freetext] and [optional freetext] [optional freetext ], a/an [TailCharacter] tail and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Prydaen.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Prydaen.<br>


===[[Rakash]]===
===Rakash===
* Animal Form
*Animal Form
He/She has a/an [AnimalFaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [EarCharacter] ears, [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] muzzle. He/She has [SkinColor] and [optional freetext] coat with [optional freetext] masking, a/an [TailCharacter] tail and a/an [WeightCharacter] build.<br>
He/She has a/an [AnimalFaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [EarCharacter] ears, [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] muzzle. He/She has [SkinColor] and [optional freetext] coat with [optional freetext] masking, a/an [TailCharacter] tail and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Rakash.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Rakash.<br>


* Non-Animal Form
*Non-Animal Form
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] hair is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build.<br>
He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] hair is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Rakash.<br>
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Rakash.<br>
* Please note that all options carry over to both forms except FaceShape, EyeCharacter EyeColors, and NoseCharacter.
*Please note that all options carry over to both forms except FaceShape, EyeCharacter EyeColors, and NoseCharacter.


==Examples of Full Custom==
==Examples of Approved Features==
Molk has a broad face with gaunt cheekbones, squinty purple eyes and a mole-covered nose. His mud-brown hair is waist-length and ragged with dead bugs and dirt on it, and is worn tied back. He has oily skin and an obese build.<br>
He is laughably short for a Dwarf.<br>


These are included only to give you a general idea of the types of changes that are permissible. Copying another player's custom features is prohibited, as much of the value of a custom feature depends on no one else having it.

===Full Customization===
Molk has a broad face with gaunt cheekbones, squinty purple eyes and a mole-covered nose. His mud-brown hair is waist-length and ragged with dead bugs and dirt on it, and is worn tied back. He has oily skin and an obese build.<br>
He is laughably short for a Dwarf.<br>
<br>
Molk has a pudgy face, slitted brown-edged eyes, one azure and one marigold and a speckled snout, lavender scales with brilliant purple stripes, a regal tail and a muscular build.<br>
Molk has a pudgy face, slitted brown-edged eyes, one azure and one marigold and a speckled snout, lavender scales with brilliant purple stripes, a regal tail and a muscular build.<br>
He is far above average height for a S'Kra Mur.<br>
He is far above average height for a S'Kra Mur.<br>


== Examples of Approved Partial Features ==
===Partial Customization===
Are you stuck or wondering what could possibly be approved? Here are some examples of past alterations that have been approved.
Are you stuck or wondering what could possibly be approved? Here are some examples of past alterations that have been approved.


;Eyes - EyeCharacter and EyeColor is included
;Eyes - EyeCharacter and EyeColor is included
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:crimson haloed and boundless abyssal-black eyes
:crimson haloed and boundless abyssal-black eyes
:captivating arboreal green eyes
:captivating arboreal green eyes
* Rejected (Not Allowed): beguiling, bewitching, breathtaking, enchanting, enthralling, entrancing, hypnotic, mesmerizing, and spellbinding


;DistinguishMark
;DistinguishMark
* Please note this feature slot appears immediately after FaceShape, or appears first if there is no FaceShape present. For S'Kra Mur, this appears AFTER the HeadCrest slot.
:gracefully arched eyebrows
:gracefully arched eyebrows
:shiny and round roly-poly cheeks
:shiny and round roly-poly cheeks
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;SkinColor
;SkinColor
:a splotchy, crimson birthmark under the chin and tanned skin
:a splotchy, crimson birthmark under the chin and tanned skin
:a sanguine-hued shesegri pattern scarred along the right shoulder and back that mars pale skin
:a layer of translucent downy fur with exotic dark stripes
:a layer of translucent downy fur with exotic dark stripes


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;FaceShape
;FaceShape
* Please note that any words that appear after '''face''' are a different slot (DistinguishMark.)
:finely featured
:finely featured
:disturbingly-wide mouth set within an angular face
:disturbingly-wide mouth set within an angular
:rakish and charismatic
:rakish and charismatic


;WeightCharacter
;WeightCharacter
Please note that females get "figure" and males get "build" and this is not changeable without a gender change.
:muscular and athletic
:muscular and athletic
:remarkably short
:daintily graceful and toned
:monstrous


;Hair - HairColor, HairLength, HairBaseStyle included
;Hair - HairColor, HairLength, HairBaseStyle included
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:lightly peppered smoke-black hair that is waist-length and thick
:lightly peppered smoke-black hair that is waist-length and thick
:red-streaked bone white hair that is cropped with shaved sides and has rakishly spiked tips
:red-streaked bone white hair that is cropped with shaved sides and has rakishly spiked tips

==Links/References==
:*https://sites.google.com/site/dragonrealmsweddings/Home/kings-wedding-features-worksheet-and-information

Revision as of 21:16, 5 November 2018

Feature alteration is generally only available via a voucher from an event. Currently, there is only 1 known alterer that performs the service, Beezell, outside of the system-available options that Empaths can perform via Shift.

Below are the rules for feature alterations as approved by staff and made available to all for the purpose of aiding in the case of a voucher being offered.

General Rules

While this article is intended to be as accurate as possible, there may be additional rules that are not yet included here. (Just because the article does not expressly prohibit your request does not mean that it is guaranteed to be approved.)

  • All colors must be colors that exist in Elanthia.
  • You cannot imply motion or sound.
  • Avoid active sounding descriptions; stay closer to physical descriptions.
  • You cannot give yourself a constant/active expression or otherwise imply a static mood or emotion.
  • You cannot dictate the feelings or reactions of others.
  • You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.
  • Scars and burns are permitted, but you cannot add/alter tattoos or brands, as those are separate processes.
  • You cannot fundamentally alter how your race looks (nothing that would require you to receive permanent social outrage).
  • No extra body parts.
  • Skin must remain skin; scales must remain scales; fur must remain fur.
  • You cannot incorporate items, non-biological matter (such as metal), or non-living biological matter.
  • You cannot give yourself magical properties, such as emitting light.
  • The GM running the merchant or handling your voucher is the final arbiter of whether your request is a permissible alteration.


Warning: If you get shifted after getting your features altered, you will NOT be able to get your altered feature back.

Race-specific Rules

Gor'Tog

  • Eyelashes are permitted, but Gor'Togs cannot have any other hair.

S'Kra Mur

See S'Kra Mur Physiology for general guidelines.

  • By request of Team S'Kra, head crests cannot currently be altered due to the lack of available lore on what constitutes an acceptable variation.
  • Tail barbs are permitted.

Prydaen

See Anatomy of the Prydaen for general guidelines.

  • Tortoiseshell and calico coats cannot have additional markings.
  • Glittered coats cannot have any markings.
  • Prydaen with secondary markings must have both color and pattern set.
  • Markings and secondary markings cannot be the same color as the coat.

Rakash

  • Agouti, brindled, tricolor, and piebald coats cannot have additional markings or masks.
  • Secondary markings cannot be the same color as the coat.
  • If the character has no secondary markings, the mask cannot be the same color as the coat.
  • If there are secondary markings, the mask can be any color.

Formatting of Features

  • Wording order must stay the same as the templates below.
  • Unbracketed text on the templates below cannot be changed. Please consider it when writing your features.
  • Females have a "figure," and males have a "build." This cannot be changed except by changing the character's gender.
  • Each text slot may be 30-50 characters, including spaces.
  • The entire feature line may only be 512 characters total, including spaces.


Human/Dwarf/Elf/Halfling/Elothean/Gnome/Kaldar

He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EarCharacter], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] hair is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Race.

Gor'Tog

He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Gor'Tog.

S'Kra Mur

He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [optional head crest]*, [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] slitted [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] snout, [text4] scales with [Underbelly (free text allowed)], a/an [TailCharacter] tail, and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a S'Kra Mur.
*S'Kra head crests cannot be altered at this time due to the lack of available lore on what is an acceptable variation at the request of Team S'Kra Mur.

Prydaen

He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [EarCharacter] ears, cat-slitted [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] mane is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] fur with [optional freetext] and [optional freetext] [optional freetext ], a/an [TailCharacter] tail and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Prydaen.

Rakash

  • Animal Form

He/She has a/an [AnimalFaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [EarCharacter] ears, [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] muzzle. He/She has [SkinColor] and [optional freetext] coat with [optional freetext] masking, a/an [TailCharacter] tail and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Rakash.

  • Non-Animal Form

He/She has a/an [FaceShape] face with [DistinguishMark], [optional EyeCharacter] [RightEyeColor and LeftEyeColor] eyes and a/an [NoseCharacter] nose. His/Her [optional color]-streaked [HairColor] hair is [HairLength] and [HairBaseStyle]. He/She has [SkinColor] skin and a/an [WeightCharacter] build/figure.
He/She is [HeightCharacter] for a Rakash.

  • Please note that all options carry over to both forms except FaceShape, EyeCharacter EyeColors, and NoseCharacter.

Examples of Approved Features

These are included only to give you a general idea of the types of changes that are permissible. Copying another player's custom features is prohibited, as much of the value of a custom feature depends on no one else having it.

Full Customization

Molk has a broad face with gaunt cheekbones, squinty purple eyes and a mole-covered nose. His mud-brown hair is waist-length and ragged with dead bugs and dirt on it, and is worn tied back. He has oily skin and an obese build.
He is laughably short for a Dwarf.

Molk has a pudgy face, slitted brown-edged eyes, one azure and one marigold and a speckled snout, lavender scales with brilliant purple stripes, a regal tail and a muscular build.
He is far above average height for a S'Kra Mur.

Partial Customization

Are you stuck or wondering what could possibly be approved? Here are some examples of past alterations that have been approved.

Eyes - EyeCharacter and EyeColor is included
sparkling orange-flecked green eyes
piercing fiery red eyes
cat-slitted icy blue eyes
crimson haloed and boundless abyssal-black eyes
captivating arboreal green eyes
  • Rejected (Not Allowed): beguiling, bewitching, breathtaking, enchanting, enthralling, entrancing, hypnotic, mesmerizing, and spellbinding
DistinguishMark
  • Please note this feature slot appears immediately after FaceShape, or appears first if there is no FaceShape present. For S'Kra Mur, this appears AFTER the HeadCrest slot.
gracefully arched eyebrows
shiny and round roly-poly cheeks
a small birthmark on the left temple
SkinColor
a splotchy, crimson birthmark under the chin and tanned skin
a layer of translucent downy fur with exotic dark stripes
Dimples
full upturned lips framed by tiny dimples
ChinCharacter
a rounded, weak chin
a narrow, pointed chin
FaceShape
  • Please note that any words that appear after face are a different slot (DistinguishMark.)
finely featured
disturbingly-wide mouth set within an angular
rakish and charismatic
WeightCharacter
muscular and athletic
remarkably short
Hair - HairColor, HairLength, HairBaseStyle included
flavescent-streaked honeyed hair is waist-length and silky
lightly peppered smoke-black hair that is waist-length and thick
red-streaked bone white hair that is cropped with shaved sides and has rakishly spiked tips

Links/References