Alteration/Guardian Spirit - Revision history

LADYMOFFITT at 19:51, 13 November 2022

2022-11-13T19:51:56Z

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	<noinclude>==Alteration Guidelines for Alfar Warriors ([[Guardian Spirit]])==</noinclude>		<noinclude>==Alteration Guidelines for Alfar Warriors ([[Guardian Spirit]])==</noinclude>
			Guardian Spirit alterations are NOT once in a lifetime. Alteration sessions during Hollow Eve for Guardian Spirit count against your alteration allotment for that event.
	===What your design should specify:===		===What your design should specify:===
	* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)		* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)

TK-421 at 02:34, 6 November 2022

2022-11-06T02:34:39Z

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	Anatomy chart: Small vestigial wings sprout from the alfar, their seeming softness at odds with the creature's hard-looking, gleaming white skin. Otherwise resembling a thin, hairless Gnome, the alfar stares coolly from the page, one outstretched hand grasping a massive, pitch-black blade as delicately as a musical instrument. The creature's immense, night-black eyes seem to follow the viewer no matter how the page is oriented.		Anatomy chart: Small vestigial wings sprout from the alfar, their seeming softness at odds with the creature's hard-looking, gleaming white skin. Otherwise resembling a thin, hairless Gnome, the alfar stares coolly from the page, one outstretched hand grasping a massive, pitch-black blade as delicately as a musical instrument. The creature's immense, night-black eyes seem to follow the viewer no matter how the page is oriented.

			<noinclude>==Also See==
			* [[Post:Alfar Warrior Alteration Guidelines - 05/31/2013 - 20:24]] (Has some background/lore information.)
			* [[Post:Alteration Guidelines for Guardian Spirit and Circle of Sympathy - 11/11/2020 - 21:47]]
			</noinclude>

TK-421 at 02:19, 6 November 2022

2022-11-06T02:19:50Z

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			<noinclude>==Alteration Guidelines for Alfar Warriors ([[Guardian Spirit]])==</noinclude>
	===What your design should specify:===		===What your design should specify:===
	* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)		* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)

TK-421: /* As with feature alterations: */

2022-11-06T01:33:05Z

As with feature alterations:

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	* If your description includes clothing or jewelry, and you wish to include rare materials, you must provide them in an appropriate amount. (You don't have to describe clothing or jewelry; this is optional.)		* If your description includes clothing or jewelry, and you wish to include rare materials, you must provide them in an appropriate amount. (You don't have to describe clothing or jewelry; this is optional.)

	===As with feature alterations:===		===As with [[Alteration/Feature\|feature alterations]]:===
	* You cannot add extra body parts to the warrior or otherwise fundamentally alter how the species looks. (Warriors have two arms, two legs, two eyes, and a vestigial pair of feathery wings. See below for official descriptions.)		* You cannot add extra body parts to the warrior or otherwise fundamentally alter how the species looks. (Warriors have two arms, two legs, two eyes, and a vestigial pair of feathery wings. See below for official descriptions.)
	* You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.		* You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.

TK-421 at 01:30, 6 November 2022

2022-11-06T01:30:58Z

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	===What your design should specify:===		===What your design should specify:===
	* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)		* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)

TK-421 at 01:30, 6 November 2022

2022-11-06T01:30:46Z

TK-421 at 01:09, 6 November 2022

2022-11-06T01:09:55Z

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2022-11-06T01:03:20Z

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=Alfar Warriors (Guardian Spirit) Alterations=

===What your design should specify:===
* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)
* '''appearance''' ("tap"): the full name of the warrior as seen in the room text (limit of 80 characters, including spaces -- no commas)
* '''description''' ("look"): what people see if they type {{com|DESCRIBE}} {{tt|WARRIOR}} (limit of 500 characters, including spaces and punctuation)
* '''name''': the name your warrior will give if asked (limit of 16 letters, no spaces)

===Design Guidelines for Guardian Spirit:===
* It cannot be named after a player character or NPC. All naming policies with regard to OOC, vulgarity, etc., apply. See: https://www.play.net/dr/info/whatsinaname.asp
* It must remain an "alfar warrior."
* The description must be written entirely in the third person. (Avoid the use of you/your.)
* The gender cannot be explicitly specified. For pronouns, use "it" or "its," not gendered pronouns.
* The warrior's gear is hard-coded and cannot be altered.
* Because the gear is hard-coded (and/or may be swapped out by players), avoid describing weapons or armor.
* References that are out of character or out of genre will not be permitted.
* If your description includes clothing or jewelry, and you wish to include rare materials, you must provide them in an appropriate amount. (You don't have to describe clothing or jewelry; this is optional.)

===As with feature alterations:===
* You cannot add extra body parts to the warrior or otherwise fundamentally alter how the species looks. (Warriors have two arms, two legs, two eyes, and a vestigial pair of feathery wings. See below for official descriptions.)
* You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.
* You cannot give your alfar magical properties, such as emitting light.
* Avoid describing facial expressions, movement, or sound. (These aspects of its appearance would always be in flux, not permanently fixed in time.)
* You cannot dictate the feelings or reactions of others. (Show, don't tell. Let other players decide how their characters would react to your warrior.)

Stock summon description (as a general reference for how this species looks): An alfar warrior is tall and fair of face, with clear eyes and white skin that gleams like ceramic. Its features are all sharp angles, with oblique cat-slitted eyes that survey its surroundings with an untouchable serenity. Its pointed ears sweep upward, accentuating the eagle-like hauteur of its mien. Its lips are tinted blue, the color of a bruise, and are set in a grim line. Flat black clasps gather its colorless hair, binding it into a severe, warlike queue that brushes its waist. Thin and attenuated, though with a wiry strength, this warrior of the alfar is not obviously male or female.

Anatomy chart: Small vestigial wings sprout from the alfar, their seeming softness at odds with the creature's hard-looking, gleaming white skin. Otherwise resembling a thin, hairless Gnome, the alfar stares coolly from the page, one outstretched hand grasping a massive, pitch-black blade as delicately as a musical instrument. The creature's immense, night-black eyes seem to follow the viewer no matter how the page is oriented.

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	===What your design should specify:===		====What your design should specify:====
	* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)		* '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit of 9 characters)
	* '''appearance''' ("tap"): the full name of the warrior as seen in the room text (limit of 80 characters, including spaces -- no commas)		* '''appearance''' ("tap"): the full name of the warrior as seen in the room text (limit of 80 characters, including spaces -- no commas)
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	* '''name''': the name your warrior will give if asked (limit of 16 letters, no spaces)		* '''name''': the name your warrior will give if asked (limit of 16 letters, no spaces)

	===Design Guidelines for Guardian Spirit:===		====Design Guidelines for Guardian Spirit:====
	* It cannot be named after a player character or NPC. All naming policies with regard to OOC, vulgarity, etc., apply. See: https://www.play.net/dr/info/whatsinaname.asp		* It cannot be named after a player character or NPC. All naming policies with regard to OOC, vulgarity, etc., apply. See: https://www.play.net/dr/info/whatsinaname.asp
	* It must remain an "alfar warrior."		* It must remain an "alfar warrior."
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	* If your description includes clothing or jewelry, and you wish to include rare materials, you must provide them in an appropriate amount. (You don't have to describe clothing or jewelry; this is optional.)		* If your description includes clothing or jewelry, and you wish to include rare materials, you must provide them in an appropriate amount. (You don't have to describe clothing or jewelry; this is optional.)

	===As with feature alterations:===		====As with feature alterations:====
	* You cannot add extra body parts to the warrior or otherwise fundamentally alter how the species looks. (Warriors have two arms, two legs, two eyes, and a vestigial pair of feathery wings. See below for official descriptions.)		* You cannot add extra body parts to the warrior or otherwise fundamentally alter how the species looks. (Warriors have two arms, two legs, two eyes, and a vestigial pair of feathery wings. See below for official descriptions.)
	* You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.		* You cannot include features that are vulgar or sexually suggestive.

Alteration/Guardian Spirit - Revision history

LADYMOFFITT at 19:51, 13 November 2022

TK-421 at 02:34, 6 November 2022

TK-421 at 02:19, 6 November 2022

TK-421: /* As with feature alterations: */

TK-421 at 01:30, 6 November 2022

TK-421 at 01:30, 6 November 2022

TK-421 at 01:09, 6 November 2022

TK-421: Created page with "__NOTOC__ =Alfar Warriors (Guardian Spirit) Alterations= ===What your design should specify:=== * '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit o..."

TK-421: Created page with "NOTOC =Alfar Warriors (Guardian Spirit) Alterations= ===What your design should specify:=== * '''adjective''': the word that immediately precedes "alfar warrior" (limit o..."